Three Princes, by Ramona Wheeler

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Publication date – February 4, 2014

Summary: (Taken from GoodReads) Lord Scott Oken, a prince of Albion, and Professor-Prince Mikel Mabruke live in a world where the sun never set on the Egyptian Empire. In the year 1877 of Our Lord Julius Caesar, Pharaoh Djoser-George governs a sprawling realm that spans Europe, Africa, and much of Asia. When the European terrorist Otto von Bismarck touches off an international conspiracy, Scott and Mik are charged with exposing the plot against the Empire.

Their adventure takes them from the sands of Memphis to a lush New World, home of the Incan Tawantinsuyu, a rival empire across the glittering Atlantic Ocean. Encompassing Quetzal airships, operas, blood sacrifice and high diplomacy, Three Princes is a richly imagined, cinematic vision of a modern Egyptian Empire.

Thoughts: Whereas many pieces of alternate history fiction I’ve seen take place either at or around the turning point in history, or else far enough into the future that it becomes a combination of alternate history and science fiction, Ramon Wheeler’s Three Princes was alternate history set long after the division of timelines, but still set in the past, making it notable in that regard alone. Wheeler plays with the timeline of civilization so that things changed at least 2000 years ago, and the book takes place in the late 1800s, making quite a gap to fill in with possibilities and tweaks that yielded an interesting world to explore.

The Roman and Egyptian empires merged, though just how expansive the empire is remains unclear. Air travel has been invented. North American colonialism didn’t really seem to happen, and instead was more of a meeting of mind between two newly-introduced cultures. England seems to be part of the Egyptian empire, but upstarts Victoria and Albert have founded a secret cult, which believes that rulers should be appointed by and rule by divine right, instead of by elections or regional governments. This doesn’t sit well with the Egyptian empire, who hold that all faiths are equal and true and that a ruler has to actually be a good one or else risk losing their throne simply by being voted down. Across the ocean, whispers from the New World suggest that the Incan empire will soon attempt a flight to the moon.

Enter Scott Oken, royalty by blood, and Mikel Mabruke, called the Professor Prince, both of whom are well-trained intelligence operatives for the Egyptian empire. They are sent to investigate the Incan moon launch, as well as to uncover more information at the black orchid cult that is growing in strength and numbers. In Tawantinsuyu, the Incan Empire, we have Viracocha, who is the final of the titular three princes whom the story revolves around. Though really, the vast majority of the story surrounds Oken, a man who can seemingly do no wrong and who attracts women at every turn.

The first half of the story involves a lot of travelling, a fair bit of characters showing off their expansive skillsets and knowledge while dodging members of the black orchid cult as they travel by land and air from Memphis to Tawantinsuyu, across the Atlantic Ocean, in order to investigate the rumours of the Incan empire launching a ship to the moon. This plot gets all but forgotten in the second half of the book after they’ve arrived there, when they meet Viracocha and get tangled in the politics of his life. Particularly, his mad brother killing the current Incan Emperor, their father, and ascending the throne.

As antagonists go, Pachacuti was rather weak. He was insane and paranoid for no particular reason and to no particular end, and not even in such a way as to illustrate a mentally ill character. He was the quintessential mad king, seeing treachery everywhere and throwing tantrums when he didn’t get his way. He had a Disney Death, with the main characters not soiling their hands with his demise but instead having his pride and ambition lead him to keep fighting when he had clearly lost, thus falling to his own death on the steps of the empire he murdered his way into. It was hard to feel much threat from him, because his character was so flimsy, his motives non-existant, and his death unsatisfying. His entire plot arc detracted from the much more interesting issue of the black orchid cult, which was extending even into the Incan empire, but details of that got largely left by the wayside and so much went undone.

I can’t say much for the treatment of women in this book either. It wasn’t that there was a great deal of sexism, at least not that wasn’t expected for the time period and settings of the novel. But the female characters were few and far between, and when they did appear, they were either romantic interests or background characters. Just about every woman gets paired up with someone at the end of the book, which might not seem like cause for complaint, but it rankled that someone thought there was some great need to have women who appeared for a few chapters get married to men who appeared for a few different chapters, after they had canonically known each other for less than a week before making the decision to marry them! Not very impressed by that.

I rated the book 3 stars, a high 3, or possibly a low 4. Three Princes gets points on creativity for the alternate history and the rough planning of several centuries of civilization and development, and for research done on cultures less commonly seen in speculative fiction, as well as the expression of some very interesting protagonists on an interesting quest with plenty of potential for expansion. Points taken off, however, for the meandering plot, weak villains, and pointless end-of-the-book hookups. Given the cliffhanger ending, I expect this book to have a sequel, and Wheeler’s writing style was smooth and decently paced enough to keep me interested, so I’ll no doubt pursue future novels set in this world, but in the end I think it could have stood some improvement. Hopefully the things I took issue with will be evened out later on.

(Received for review from the publisher via NetGalley.)

8 comments on “Three Princes, by Ramona Wheeler

    • It really is a shame. I was so excited to read it, and I was definitely entertained while I read, but the more I thought about it, the more the problems came to light. They were disguised a fair bit by the smooth writing style, but that doesn’t make up for everything.

      Though when it comes to the antagonist’s death, I was rolling my eyes while it was all happening, not just in hindsight. I could practically see the whole thing happen in Disney-style animation, with the dramatic music in the background. It was pretty cheesy.

  1. Yay, one of the first reviews I’ve seen for this book! Sorry to hear it didn’t live up to expectations, but glad to hear it was at least entertaining. I’ll still probably check this out, once it releases.

  2. Too bad this book didn’t fare better. The premise is interesting and bodes for a wealth of possibilities that could have created a whole series of brilliant plots due to the blending of all these extinct cultures.

    • I was really hoping that more attention would be given to the black orchid cult plot. That alone would have made the novel so much better in my eyes, since that was what primarily interested me once it was revealed. I’m hoping that if there’s a sequel (and I don’t doubt that there probably will be), a lot of the problems I had will get ironed out.

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